Wednesday, January 11, 2012

mr.bean (review )

 



 reviewed by: betty

genre: comedy






what's the basicstory line?

mr. bean  goes to the swimming pool.first he wants to rides a baby's slide.he sitson the slide. but one swimming pool employeesees that,so he has to get out. after that happen,he wants to dives. so, he doesn't try short one. he went tall one, but when he saw down, he very scary. he stayed there for few minutes.but there was 2boys behind him.one boy kicked he.so he dived looks like frog.

Are the characters believable?

no, for example, mr. bean wants to ride a baby's slide.but regular adult don't like baby's slide.also mr. bean was standing on the diving place,but he didn't dives and just scary.however,regular adultscare about high place,they can go down themself,with there legs.this is not good for children too.in this TV show, there was 2 boys too. one boy kicked mr. bean, but most children don't kick adult.so all of this characters are not believable.

in my opinion,this story is good for sad people.this tv show is comedy, when sad or upset people see this, they can smile. however, is not good for children. in this tv show,thereare lots of dengerous actions.then children can fallow mr. bean.

i'll give 7.5 stars for mr.bean. because it's really funny,but there is some dengerous actions.

Friday, January 6, 2012

narrative essay

Meeting ggam

having a pet is very good for charactor. in america,there most people raise pets. i love animal.and my favorite animal is dog.kind of puppy.
 i wanted to raise a pet dog.but my perents was opposed.

last year,there was one whistle get up. i received one massage from my parents. in massage perents said 'yoon ha, today you'll get one dog it's a dachshund!it is puppy.' after i received this massage.i was so exciting.i just waiting for him.....

when my dog come to home,it was so small. after few minutesdad tell to me and my brother.
'he is a baby so you and edwin have to keep careful .' but now he is almost one years old.when wsaw him first time, he was strange about our family. however, when my family give a lots of affection to him, i think he felt like this. 'there are my family' and our family thought like that too.  now we are giving a lots of affection to him.because he is my family.

in my opinion,when we raise a pet, we have yo give affection to pet.
then pet will think like this 'there are my family!'then pet can be our family. then it is not lonely.it will be more fun!!

discriptive essay

                                                          HUMMER2

전체 크기 이미지 보기i want to discribe about hummer2.
hummer2 is a car. hammer2 is an american car and color is black.
but i saw many colors in internet, like red, yellow and brown. my father baught this car when iwas 8 years old. when i was 8 years old, i was in phillipines for 2 month.after i arrived korea, my father has a strange car.
that was a hummer . when i ride that car. i  felt i'm just on the air. i can't hear strange sound of car.
and seat was so soft so i just fall a sleep in a car just a few minutes later.
hummer is a jeep. hummer's tires is bigger than ohers. i heard my father, each tire's selling 400000won.it's expensive! but hummer's design is like a handsome guy.that is reason why i discribe hummer.